Crying

Are there unknown WMD's out there?
mangled hands held his face pushing it back, inside the awful truths, clarity slammed home touching these lesions of life, pleading for the scars to heal, he grabbed the instrument of his choosing and began stabbing with bad intent disturbed beliefs cried out creosote misery oozed demonic escapism puddled beneath every wound now festering lost in release he became.... a visage of wrongful concern contorted from youth, told more than was needed reaching for the pen, the stabbing began again

My husband doesn't care that I'm pregnant?
I'm currently 7 months pregnant with a little baby boy that I can't wait to meet. Unfortunately, my husband of six years doesn't seem to share my enthusiasm. He barely even seems to notice that I'm pregnant at all... When I first found out the good news, I couldn't wait to tell him! I sat around all day trying to envision the moment and his reaction. I pictured laughing, crying, rejoicing, etc. However, when he got home from work and I informed him that he was going to be a father, his only reaction was an unimpressed “Oh… you know we can’t afford to have you quit your job right?” Needless to say, I was crushed. Unfortunately, he has remained equally indifferent throughout the rest of my pregnancy. When I try to discuss baby names, he just responds “I don’t care, as long as it doesn’t sound stupid.” He still hasn’t even felt the baby kick. He refuses to go shopping for baby clothes, cribs, toys... anything! We were scheduled to go to a parenting class together and he wouldn’t even get out of bed. It’s putting a major strain on our relationship and don’t think I can be with him if he’s going to be like this after the baby is born. Doesn’t he love our baby? Does he even plan on showing up at the hospital when the baby is born? I’ve tried confronting him with the issue but he continues to avoid dealing with it. How should I handle the situation?

tell me what you think please?
i have been writing this song and i am not the best of writers so if any one can help me rewrite it or just a few hints and tell me what you think so far it would be a great help its called to strong i know its in the wrong categorie but i wasint geting good answers We had the love i never thought it would end like this They said it would never work, but i kept holding on i know it was wrong i held on to strong Why cant you just take my hand Just understand I need you now More than ever now, Cause I i want to cry don’t say goodbye Just hold me tight Cause scars don’t fade away There for eternity Theirs tears down my face there’s blood down my arms And scars don’t fade away It hurts so much trust me Ma heart it bleeds inside Why cant we be alright please oh please just hold me just hold me tight A no it was wrong a held to strong Why cant you just go just go away and leave me alone Get out of my head Get out of my life I need to move on But your love it hunts it hunts me inside Give it some time For these scars to heal But I need you now just hold me tight Cause scars don’t fade away There for eternity Theirs tears down my face there’s blood down my arms And scars don’t fade away It hurts so much trust me Ma heart it bleeds inside Why cant we be alright please oh please just hold me just hold me tight A no it was wrong a held to strong These scars don’t heal this pains to real I am num inside I just want to hide Hide from you hide from the hole dam world You strike through ma heart These scars you left on my arms And you don’t even know it do you even care Do you even know want you have done I don’t think so Cause scars don’t fade away There for eternity Theirs tears down my face there’s blood down my arms And scars don’t fade away It hurts so much trust me Ma heart it bleeds inside But Am goanna be alright Cause scars don’t fade away There for eternity Theirs tears down my face there’s blood down my arms And scars don’t fade away It hurts so much trust me Ma heart it bleeds inside But don’t worry I am alright I don’t need you Am fine without you A no it was wrong a held to strong

Rate the writing? Flaws and all that?
Hn, this in an old story of mine I dug up, so I thought maybe I can get a few pointers on it. Be as harsh as you care to be. I have an urge to ask many of these on pieces of mine now. DX ----- It all started on a dark and stormy night. The wind tore at the forest, uprooting them with claws of anger. Leaves pounded by the wind whipped around, along with other bits of forest debris. The sky was ripped apart by storm clouds, pouring bullet-hard rain on the ruined area. The cries of dying animals formed a broken chorus of blood. Nah, just kidding. This isn't what happened at all. But I fooled you, didn't I? The REAL story actually began on a bright morning, with the birds chirping their songs, and the sun shedding rays of light on the scene. Perfectly innocent, no? But, you know, the most horrible things always start on the happiest of days, lurking in the cheerful Sun's shadow... Ah yes, introductions. I forgot. My name is Diala Glypin, and I'm what you would call an average person. Excluding the fact that my parents abandoned me at a young age- I don't have the faintest memories of them. But it just makes the truth easier to take. Besides that, there's nothing special about me. The one thing I live for is laughter- a speck of light in the darkness. Laughter causes all those twisted things to flee for a short while that is filled with bliss. This particular day, I was perched on a tree, cloud-watching. Not very interesting for many people, but I happen to love it. The clouds were all fluffy and soft-looking today, I noted. I grinned, my dark, oval eyes lighting up. These days always were joyful. The bell rang the tone for first period, and the school transformed into a sea of students rushing to their classes. Scampering from the tree, I blended in with the herd. Sighing, I plopped down into my seat. Our Science teacher, Mrs. Ched, had yet to arrive. But when she did, it was obvious something was wrong. Her normally calm face was set in stone, her eyes tinted with red. Had she been... crying? Soon after her, a policewomen glided into the classroom. All of our attention was riveted on her, and, more importantly, her hands. She was clutching the standard handcuffs police used on criminals. Why ever would she need that? A special lesson? I began to notice that while the rest of the people were still staring in shock at the women, our teacher's eyes seemed to linger on me. Finally, after a pause, she spoke, her voice smooth, not at all matching her jagged words. Diala Glypin, you are arrested. For the murder of Angeline Ched's husband. --- Hnn, not really my usual writing style. But oh well.

My girlfriend's brother got hurt and she's mad at me?
me and 2 of my friends were gonna play basketball and my girlfriend's 13 yr old bro wanted to come so i let him. i hang out with him alot and hes like a younger brother to me. so anyway one of my friends elbowed him really hard in the mouth by accident, and he has braces. it cut his mouth there was blood, he was crying, it was bad. the kid isnt mad but now my girlfriend is pissed at me because somehow its my fault he got hurt, she says we shouldnt have been playing rough because me my friends are so much bigger older than him (hes 13 and me my friends are all 19 or 20) do you agree with her should i be responsible for this even though i didnt hit him and should she still be mad at us even though both me and my friend apologized and her brother isnt mad?

Friendship I guess Im taking it the wrong way PLZ PLZ HELP!
OK...so me and this girl named Ashlyn was friends through seventh grade well we had this dance coming up and well sure enough we got in a fight and wasnt talking to eachother for like two months or so...well anyways she has this other friend named sarah and well they have been friends for years! well anyways we and Ashlyn made up I went over to her house she was even supposed to come to mine she invited me to her birthday and we even planned to go shopping together! We are pretty close and i though of her still as my BFF and I thought she thought the same well last night Sarah can be such a B word shes a crap starter n everything else well she didnt like me n Ashlyn beiong friends again so last night she pops up on facebook and is like If you cant deal with me then u arnt friends with Ashlyn so u can just hit the road and I told Ashlyn and everything well Ashlyn is like me n you arnt bffs were just friends we will never be bffs and i started crying like ALOT! cuz it really really hurt me! so i got off facebook and she kept calling me so i answered it and i just hung up cuz she said the same thing but the next time she called i just didnt answer it I got back on facebook and sarah poped up on facebook and was like u always hurt Ashlyn and ur a horrible friend and all this stuff which made me cry more i acted like nothing was wrong to ashlyn but im sure she knew..plz plz help me give me advice no retarded answer sorry it took so long PLZ read THANKS!

How come she never started a conversation with me?
There was a girl who a had a boyfriend but 1)Smile every time she first walks into class 2)Stare for an 1 hour 30 min 3 days a week for 5 months. She spent the her whole class time glancing. 3)Arrive late 30 min to locate me and sit near me even though there were many seats available 4)Laugh at the jokes I told the class 5)Wait until the end of class waiting and tapping her feet 6)Look back every 5 seconds 7)Pass by me and stop and approach me 8)Stand up at the end of class and look back and smile 9)Glancing and crying next to me wiping her tears. 1)Stare even though her boyfriend is outside of class waiting for her 2)On the last day she had her head down while she was holding hands with her boyfriend so I glanced at her so she would put her head up and smile at me and then put her head back down while she was holding hands with her boyfriend? 3)At the end of the semester, she stared but I didnt bother looking she had put her head down and left with her boyfriend 4)During the last days of class, her boyfriend was waiting outside but she would stand up and approach me and smile and leave with her boyfriend. I confronted her about staring so she asked screamed and asked me to stop bothering her so I did just that. She never ever bothered to talk to me first and remained very mysterious. A year later, I saw her pass by but she walked half across the hall and she stopped there and approached me but I didn't bother to talk to her or glance at her. A week later, I said Hi, how are you doing and she ignored me and walked passed me so I approached her and I sat next to her on a bench and she looked into my eyes and I just kept saying to her, Can you tell me what's going on repeatedly. I felt I made a mistake. Sometime later, I went up to her and asked May we talk and responded by saying no and just walked away. Recently she passed by my class to see whether I was in class. I passed by her and said hello and she ignored me. She recently followed me but I ignored her and went into class.

Why is she playing hard to get? What is she trying to get out of me acting this way?
There was a girl who a had a boyfriend but 1)Smile every time she first walks into class 2)Stare for an 1 hour 30 min 3 days a week for 5 months. She spent the her whole class time glancing. 3)Arrive late 30 min to locate me and sit near me even though there were many seats available 4)Laugh at the jokes I told the class 5)Wait until the end of class waiting and tapping her feet 6)Look back every 5 seconds 7)Pass by me and stop and approach me 8)Stand up at the end of class and look back and smile 9)Glancing and crying next to me wiping her tears. 1)Stare even though her boyfriend is outside of class waiting for her 2)On the last day she had her head down while she was holding hands with her boyfriend so I glanced at her so she would put her head up and smile at me and then put her head back down while she was holding hands with her boyfriend? 3)At the end of the semester, she stared but I didnt bother looking she had put her head down and left with her boyfriend 4)During the last days of class, her boyfriend was waiting outside but she would stand up and approach me and smile and leave with her boyfriend. I confronted her about staring so she asked screamed and asked me to stop bothering her so I did just that. She never ever bothered to talk to me first and remained very mysterious. A year later, I saw her pass by but she walked half across the hall and she stopped there and approached me but I didn't bother to talk to her or glance at her. A week later, I said Hi, how are you doing and she ignored me and walked passed me so I approached her and I sat next to her on a bench and she looked into my eyes and I just kept saying to her, Can you tell me what's going on repeatedly. I felt I made a mistake. Sometime later, I went up to her and asked May we talk and responded by saying no and just walked away. Recently she passed by my class to see whether I was in class. I passed by her and said hello and she ignored me. She recently followed me but I ignored her and went into class.

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